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Pokemon Under the Surface

June 21st, 2017, 7:31 pm
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LightEclipse June 21st, 2017, 7:31 pm
Amber the Eevee and Noche the Umbreon are doing okay. They have a decent life, with nothing too bad happening to them. Other than Amber losing her memory and Noche being miscolored with its disadvantages, they've been together for almost a year and got each other's back.
But life changes after they (literally) run into a suspicious looking Jolteon at the village market. And then mysteriously, on that same day, get a request from a Vulpix to find a Fire Stone, with a "strange necklace" as a reward.
They thought nothing could go wrong.
Turns out, there was a lot they didn't know about it and themselves.
Because things are always deeper under the surface.

I LOVED this.
But then people started to comment stuff about STLE on it, and it just.... lost its luster.
So yeah.
Um, same thing. Want the comic idea. PM me.
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ShadowStalker1128 June 21st, 2017, 9:25 pm
Wait, you're cancelling both? :(
LightEclipse June 21st, 2017, 9:29 pm
It's a weird thing I do. When I work on comics, then after a short while I grow uninterested.
ShadowStalker1128 June 21st, 2017, 9:34 pm
I do! At first, I didn't like LoS. Like, I liked it, but the beginning sucks! Now that I'm going over the script, there are a million things I could have done better. But now that I'm actually moving on, I'm getting excited! It's ok though; sometimes it takes a while to find something you want to draw. I started like 20 personal comics at home, and like 18 didn't make it past the first page! Then I took all my older ideas and kinda mushed them together, added some stuff here and there... BOOM! LoS.
I'm not sure this is helping. Ugh.
I'm just saying take your time to figure out something that you're really excited about, and don't let haters get the best of you. Just keep your head high; some people really enjoy your work! (Like me!)
LightEclipse June 21st, 2017, 9:38 pm
Thanks, thanks, and thanks!
And lool I have so many comics I drew Cover on and then abandoned, and I am thinking of combining sum stuffs.
ShadowStalker1128 June 21st, 2017, 9:40 pm
Yes! Like you could combine the Half Blood one and UtS and make the half shiny eevee have two different personalities that surface at different times or something! I dunno I'm bad at ideas XD
All I know is that it could be good. All your ideas seem gud >:3
LightEclipse June 21st, 2017, 10:03 pm
Lol thanks! Ur ideas are gud too!
ShadowStalker1128 June 21st, 2017, 10:04 pm
WildfireK June 23rd, 2017, 9:55 pm
Oof, yus I sorta feel the same way
Right now the only part I'm really proud of is the Rayfi-Nira relationship, and a few other things, and the beginning of Stars and Smoke isn't that great compared to Lynxstar's Tyranny, but I'll still keep on workin' once I get my tablet fixed xp
When you lay awake for hours at night brainstorming character relations and plot points, it's a good sign, though. There are only three stories I've ever made that have made it past the 20 page mark, and all three of them kept me awake

(Stars and Smoke and Lynxstar's Tyranny are two of them)
ShadowStalker1128 June 28th, 2017, 8:26 pm
Umm...if you're going to cancel them should be you probably post something saying that in the comics themselves? Unless you're not cancelling c:
LightEclipse June 28th, 2017, 10:13 pm
@ShadowStalker1128: I know, Im just super lazy XP